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Tilting at cattle
Our train to London
Hangs from wires
Wires hover above
Curl through fields
Like contour lines
A pylon carries
A pig-pink terrace
Under tweedy arms
And the strings of England
Still strum
A tune of grass and oak
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Nice, though I think lower case letters at the beginning of lines would suit better, keep the flow of the sounds, and the lines.
What does the third stanza mean? The impact of a poem is in the eye – or ear – of the reader but I have to say that did find this a trifle precious.