BY JEAN ANN OWENS
Copyright is held by the author.
I’m standing up on post
At work, now
Working for Securitas Security
In February
I’m wearing a red top
Covered with a black jacket
I’m wearing black uniform pants
I have new black shoes on
From Wal-mart
Dr, Scholl’s
I’m very comfortable
Right, now
On my left side, I here loud music playing
I’m looking at, a band inside the bar, on 4th
Street Live
So, many people inside there
Having fun, dancing, eating, drinking, talking
I turned around, now
Looking forward
Two young men coming off the parking lot
Elevator
One of them
Approaching me, asking me
About a Japanese restaurant
I don’t know where it is
Never heard of it
This day is my first
Night on the job here
On 4th Street Live
This young man is standing, very
Close to me and staring at me
                       And facing me
 Both young men
 Finally left to fine that
 Japanese restaurant
 I been working in this area
 Awhile
 Finally all the places
 About to close on Fourth Street Live
 Both young men are coming
 Before, leaving
 One of them
 Said, I love you, to me
 He doesn’t know me
 I don’t know him    
 I’m thinking maybe, intuition
 Or
 Maybe, been drinking
 Then he said,
 I think I love you
 Now
 All three of us
 Are guessing
 Ages
 First my age
 Now
 They want me to guess
 Their age
 One of them, I said twenty-eight
 The other one twenty-five
 I’m pretty close 
 In their ages
 I didn’t tell them my age
 At all
 Both of them were guessing
 Never close of guessing my age
 One of them
 Like my body
         My hair
         My teeth
 I don’t know, why
 He standing close to me
 Both of them are leaving, now
 While
 One of them, still stares at me
 He gets in the elevator
 And kneeled, still looking at me
 Like  
 He wants to ask me
 To marry him
 I’m staring at him, looking
 Until the elevator closes
 Now
 Both young men are gone

I really like the building suspense and the ending that leaves it hanging with a what if. Will they meet up again? Great!